Wednesday, January 30, 2008

☺I Felt It☺

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As I scribble down this poem

I remember Tim Berners Lee.
Talking about HTML,
There's nothing I could tell.

Memorizing the codes,
Oh it made my brain explode.
If I'm just a smart gal,
Then it wouldn't be an obstacle.


As I listen to my teacher explain,
At that moment I was burning into flame.
There's no choice for me to do,
But to try and learn from it too.


It made such technological advances,
So what should I guess.
It made a great help,
But still suffering was what I have felt.

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33 comments:

Chiwawa The Dreamer said...

I like the style. Wish I could make a page like this. And the poem has great rhythm and message.

Kokol said...

very nice poem. medyo maiksi pero ok ang laman.. 4 out of 5!!!!!!!!!

lottie said...

kokol: hahaha.. :)) lamats cozin! :) :x

lottie said...

xavier: i know you can do it xavier. :) thanks for the comment. :)

Tinkerbell said...

nyc cha!!
peo medyo maiksi nga lng.

chixie pixie said...

wooot. lotttie :DD
nyc :DD
nyc:DD
palakpakan :))

neni said...

nice one! hahaha.

Desiree Joy A. Eldian said...

..(^^,) nice poem.. u really felt it.. whee!!!

lottie said...

nikki: haha.. la na maicp eh.. kea ganun.. tsaka d ko feel haha.. :))

chx && inna: haha.. lamats!!

des: yea.. naramdaman ko! haha.. at sobrang mabigat sa loob.. joke. :))

Jemay said...

As I listen to my teacher explain,
At that moment I was burning into flame.
There's no choice for me to do,
But to try and learn from it too.

CLAPSSSSS. ;;)
Shettt. ;;)
NICE POEM. <3

narj07 said...

oh ganun? la nga kwenta un.. anyways, yours is much better than mine.. haha:)) thanks sa comment:D

ღ ΞniD.10 ღ said...

Nyc One Cha.!

lottie said...

jem: thanks twin. :) imy.

markee: idool ko ung io!! :))

geh: tenkyu. :)

MonsterPrincessVie-sama said...

nice one lottie :p

and great page :p

teach me how to do it T-T
haha onegai :p

aizel said...

tama, cha. tama. :DD


commentback. :]

Rae Marc said...

oi ganda ng blog at poem!
rated R!
you're on fire!
comment ka rin sa blog ko plz!

RHEN said...

nice poem. :D

hehe.
comment me back

ingat. :d

lottie said...

vina: thanks mucho. :D sur i can help yu..

rae marc: wow. lubb yurr comment! haha. it made me laugh. :D

aizel: gandahan mo nman commento mo! LOL..

rhen: thanks doi.:D

L-e-s-L-i-E said...

hello!! nice poem.. =p

lottie said...

leslie: ahehe. gracias! :D

ateneo_scorpion ii said...

nice.

lottie said...

miko: thanks!:D

megan asakura said...

Nice poem!

Charlottie!

megan asakura said...

san ka ba tlga nkatingin ahehe

lottie said...

megan: lamats! :D

lottie said...

megan: saan nakatingin? haha.. :]] di ko na maalala..

sk8_core said...

nyc. nyc. may effort. hahaha. :D

C@rL said...

nice cha ...............hahahaha d(n_n)b

lottie said...

al: malamang! :]] haha. ty! :D

lottie said...

carllean: ayee. haha. :DD thanks. :D

eiram >. said...

tama talaga. suffering.
hahaha. nice ;)

Princess Jen-Tiu said...

nice! *applause :D
*heads down lottie totie love doggies
peace
n.nv

great poem. :)

lottie said...

marie: hahaha. :DD maloka ako. :p

ikaaa: hahaha. :DD baliw! i hate doggies!